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31 August 2009 @ 07:30 am
Untitled 1  
Name: Untitled
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst STFU YOU ALL KNEW IT WOULD HAPPEN SOONER OR LATER
Pairings: Yamajima, one-sided Yuutaro
A/N: Ummmm I broke my promise ;___; such a bad Mumu. Enjoy? Or don't enjoy D: In fact I'd rather you not enjoy it to discourage me from writing angst ever again. EXTREMELY STRONG, HARSH CRITIQUE REQUESTED PRZ. Also, the italics are, for the most part, speech. Sorry if it gets confusing. XD

Ryutaro sighed as he fell onto the couch, closing his eyes and leaning back his head. Tired and stressed, the last place he wanted to be was the jimusho. He groaned as he covered his eyes,
I'm such an idiot,
He had woken up an hour too early.
Daylight savings.
Thankfully the practice room was quiet-- no one had arrived yet, and they had a comfy place to sit. He sunk further into the couch, beginning to doze off.
OH MY GOD, I'M SO SORRY I'M LATE!
Ryutaro jumped as he looked toward the door,
Are? Where is everyone else...?
He couldn't help but smile-- he wasn't the only one who had forgotten.
Daylight savings.
Ryutaro sat up, he knew now with Yuuto in the room there was no way he would get back to sleep any time soon. The older boy smacked his head, letting out a small laugh,
I totally forgot.
Yuuto took a seat next to his kouhai, leaning back into the couch.
Me too.
They both looked at each other for a moment, then laughed again. The room fell quiet as they sat on the couch, neither speaking for a good 10 minutes. Ryutaro wondered if he should say something, Yuuto seemed lost in his thoughts, a worried, almost troubled look on his face. He figured Yuuto was just concentrating on something, though his gaze wasn't particularly focused. Ryutaro crossed his arms,
You know,
The silence broken,
Today,
No turning back,
Yama-chan, he... broke up with me.
Yuuto leaned forward on the couch, resting his elbows on his knees and glancing back at a stunned and confused Ryutaro.
He... what?
A bitter smile crossed Yuuto's face as he looked away once more,
He told me, I was annoying and I should quit bothering him.
Ryutaro found it hard to breathe,
He told me he didn't ...
Yuuto's choked voice echoed through the room,
Love me... anymore.
A soft whisper, but Ryutaro heard it all the same. A small whimper, face buried in his hands, he trembled as Ryutaro slowly, hesitantly, wrapped his arms around the wounded,
Oh, hey guys, I thought I was late.
Ryutaro felt Yuuto tense under his hold, slowly bringing his hands down from his face, but not looking up.
I guess daylight savings was today.
Ryutaro looked up at him angrily,
What's with the tense atmosphere?
He said nothing. Ryosuke sighed and sat down on the couch next to Yuuto, dropping his bag on the table, cooly, calmly,
As Yuuto stood up,
I'm going to the bathroom.
Ryosuke shrugged, Ryutaro clenched his teeth, looking forward.
The door closes behind him,
Why did you do it?
A smirk, a soft laugh,

But he says nothing.
 
 
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Current Music: Hoshi wo Mezashite- NewS
 
 
 
Mokona_Modokishadow_mokona on August 28th, 2009 03:52 am (UTC)
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YUUUUTTOOOOOOO!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYY YAMADAAAAA????? T_T *manju punches Yamada silly* >_<

No one does that to Yuuto! >_< NO ONEEEEEE!!!
maddythalia03 on August 30th, 2009 03:36 am (UTC)
WTF EVIL YAMADA LJFGBALDKFJGBALDFKG *0*;;

I adore this wifey!! And I love the style it's written in too :D Now share it share it, cause it's awesome!! ♥♥♥
maplarojcanmaplarojcan on September 6th, 2009 05:03 am (UTC)
O_O

WHAT? what what!? *shakes head* /can't quite grasp the situation.

what...?
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 6th, 2009 05:08 am (UTC)
SORRY IS IT TOO CONFUSING? T____T
maplarojcanmaplarojcan on September 6th, 2009 11:22 am (UTC)
noooo! it's not confusing. :( it's... it's.... EVIL! O_O
ムムちゃん: Pokemon- Whismur kowai D:spongykittens on September 6th, 2009 03:28 pm (UTC)
O___O!!!
maplarojcanmaplarojcan on September 7th, 2009 02:46 am (UTC)
how could anyone break poor yuuto's heart like that? T___T?
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 7th, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
um.... UM... UM... I have no answer to that ;_______________;
maplarojcanmaplarojcan on September 7th, 2009 03:25 am (UTC)
ahahahaha! :) hahaha his heart is so clean and pure that it's easy to break? hahahaha! :) yay!
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 7th, 2009 03:28 am (UTC)
POOR BB *SOB* NO ONE SHOULD BREAK HIS PURE, DELICATE HEART *puts a bandaid on it*
obsessed_makpa: justin bieberobsessed_makpa on September 6th, 2009 05:35 am (UTC)
Whoa. Asdfghkjllasdbcaubouv. That was so pretty. *killed*

I'm sorry. I absolutely love angst. *murdered* XD

Chuu~
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 6th, 2009 05:39 am (UTC)
>_____> I know you know it wasn't &hearts

XD hehehehe~
Megane-channightbaron079 on September 6th, 2009 06:53 am (UTC)
woah... evil yamada is kinda scary... but nice point of view there ^^
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 6th, 2009 03:33 pm (UTC)
lol yeah XD Thank you for reading &hearts
it's me ljoe: yamajimatravelaishi07 on September 6th, 2009 07:26 am (UTC)
i knew yamada was f-- *murdered*

.awwww~ NakaMori. ;_; YuTaroo~~ <3 *murdered* the angst. the angst..! *shot*

.i totally love how you wrote this one. :DDD <3
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 6th, 2009 03:34 pm (UTC)
LOLOLOLOL XD *unmurders you*

lf;ladkf I have secretly shipped but not shipped this couple for months nowww XDD ahh the internal battless D: THE ANGST!!

>w> w-well thank you but I think we both know you don't ;D &hearts

Thanks for reading though ^^
taiga_luisetaiga_luise on September 6th, 2009 09:00 pm (UTC)
...
I'm confused o.o
But a really great story!!!
*luv*
Want to read moooore^^
And by the way~ wanna be friends?
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 6th, 2009 09:02 pm (UTC)
GOOD >8D/ *shotshot*

ffffffff no you don't.
And sure, I'd love to!! ^___^ even though I'm a horrible friend to have, add me at your own risk XD lol &hearts
ime: yamajimagrasshirogime on September 6th, 2009 10:04 pm (UTC)
"He told me, I was annoying and I should quit bothering him" YAMADAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~!!!! jcchnfg sfdgshfgjasjfawkekkf
"He told me he didn't ...Love me... anymore" .YAMADAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~~!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!! retchwecerhtfceahrfxsoidjsffkdsjfdv
"But he says nothing" O.O *heart* s-so why did you do it.... ;_;
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 7th, 2009 12:24 am (UTC)
s-so why did you do it.... ;_;

That's for your imagination to answer ;) If it helps, I'm sure he had a good reason D:
avi_yamajimafanavi_yamajimafan on September 7th, 2009 05:12 am (UTC)
NOOOO!!!
I hate angst Yamajima....
Poor Yuto T.T
Please write fluffier Yamajima...although I think this one is great
Btw, I've added you as friend...please add me back ^^
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 7th, 2009 05:32 am (UTC)
Same ;w; *shot*
Oh I definitely will be lol ignoring the fact that I have a whole plot for this story in mind... *shot*
:D Sorry that I'm a horribly aloof friend to have but yoroshiku ne :D
here comes the sun ☀wooden_buttons on September 7th, 2009 12:04 pm (UTC)
ASLDKJALSKJD WHAT WHAT IS THAT. HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE HOW COULD YOU

T________________________________________T
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 7th, 2009 06:05 pm (UTC)
I ACTUALLY HAVE A WHOLE ANGSTY SERIES PLANNED OUT IN MY HEAD BUT I THINK YOU'D RATHER I LEAVE IT THERE LOL

i'm sorry bb &hearts *huggle?*
ynlover: pic#91567085ynlover on September 9th, 2009 11:18 am (UTC)
omfb, super coool.

it was pretty simple but it had a lot of impact.

YUTOOOOOOO~~~
ムムちゃんspongykittens on September 11th, 2009 01:27 am (UTC)
^^; thank you very much for reading &hearts

YUUUUTOOOOO~~~~~~ ^___^
Em: Yamada_deadshadowsofcherry on September 10th, 2009 09:44 am (UTC)
Why is Yamada so evil? D:
ムムちゃん: Pokemon- Whismur kowai D:spongykittens on September 11th, 2009 01:27 am (UTC)
D; idk my bff jill